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Joshua stepped out of his house, as cold air blew through his short brown hair, and he picked up the trash bag he was taking out to the street, and he slowly stepped down his porch steps. The night didn't feel right, he thought, as though something dark lurked nearby. He walked down the pathway that lead to his driveway, looking around and noticing that the neighborhood was dead, there was no noise, no lights, nobody. The only light was his street light, that illuminated the cloud of fog that was rolling in. He walked down his driveway, looking around as if someone was watching him.
When he reached his trashcan he heard a quite woman's voice, almost like a whisper, but there was no one to speak it. He dropped the trash in, and began to walk back to his house, but he heard the whisper again. "Is anyone there, if you are, show yourself," he called out in a weak voice, as to not alert any of his neighbors. Another whisper echoed around him, this time he could almost make out what the voice was saying, it sounded like she was calling his name.
"Who are you, where are you?" Joshua whispered. Then a cloud of fog moved in, low on the ground. He couldn't see his own feet, and more was floating inwards. Joshua was scared, but unwilling to walk back to his house before he figured out who was making the noise, he shouted, "WHOEVER YOU ARE, SHOW YOURSELF, NOW!" A silhouette appeared in the smoke, but was too far off to make out who or what it was. The figure disappeared as suddenly as it had appeared, and more fog rolled in, making it hard for him to even see his own hands.
"Who are you, where are you?" Joshua called out, turning his head around looking for the figure again. Then his head was jerked back, popping his neck, as a voice whispered in his ear, "I am Violette, and I am right here" said a seductive woman's voice. Then fangs sunk into Joshua's neck, and he flailed his arms back, trying to strike whoever was biting into his neck. He only grew to be less powerful with every swing though, as he began to drift off into a coma of pleasure.
Violette took her last swallow, and she pulled the drained boy up, kissing him. Joshua's eyes popped open as he saw the pale woman kissing him. He tried to jump back, but it was as if she had control of him. He began to enjoy the kiss, as something on her lips was delicious. When she pulled away, she stared into his eyes and simply whispered, "I made the right choice." Joshua fell to the ground again, but this time fully conscious and in pain.
Joshua's insides felt like the were being torn apart and rebuilt. He looked down at his hands, they had shrunk and become feminine and dainty. He followed his arms to his body with his eyes, noticing that they were less hairy, and thinner. Also, he noticed that his whole body was becoming more pale. His shoulders then cracked inwards, making him yelp, and his waist thinned and his core hardened. He felt his penis begin to tingle and shrink, he pulled his pants from his body only to see it be replaced by a tight vagina.
He panicked, and looked up to Violette, she only smiled at him with an evil look. His legs thinned out and his feet shrank into small women's feet. All his body hair started to fall out as well, as the changed went up through his body, to his head and chest. He began to grow breasts, and as horrified as Joshua was, he couldn't help but to feel them.
Then as he looked down to see his new C+ sized breasts, long brown hair cascaded down in front of his eyes. As he began to grab at his hair his face transformed, his cheekbones raised, his nose shrank, and his entire face became more feminine. Then his teeth began to grow longer, and sharper, he now had full vampiric fangs.  Joshua began to cry, as his, now her body began to battle with itself. Male and female hormones fighting for control, but it was too much for Joshua, and she passed out.
When all the changes finished Joshua woke up in a mysterious room. She looked around, brushing her hair away from her eyes. She tried to stand up, though stumbling around, she still managed. Joshua was now alone in a dark room, not even aware of who she was. She was still in shock, and thought that what had happened was just a dream, but when she moved her tongue in her mouth she felt fangs. Joshua looked down at herself and became dizzy with the sight. She moved her hands over to touch her breasts, but was then startled by how dainty her hands were and how long her nails were.
She began to shake, frightened of what she thought was a dream from her last slumber to turn out to be real. She felt unstable, and as she looked for a place to sit down she saw a mirror facing her, but there was no reflection. She froze, starring in the vacant mirror, not capable of understanding what was going on.
"I see you're awake Evangeline," said the same, quietly seductive voice from behind her. "What have you do…" Joshua paused, startled by her own, now feminine voice. "Don't worry yourself my dear, all will be fine," Violette said as she moved in closer to Joshua. Joshua, still shocked that her voice wasn't hers, just looked into Violette's eyes.
"I saw you a few days ago, walking home from work, and I something about you got my attention." Violette continued, "I knew then that I had to have you, and now I do, Evangeline." Joshua got over her fear of speaking, and replied in a still quivering, but angry voice, "So you turned me into… this," as she gestured to her whole body. "Quite Evangeline, this life is better." Violette said in a calm, quite voice. "I didn't ask for this though!" Joshua said in a now much more agitated tone, "and my name is Joshua!"
"Shhh," Violette said as she moved her finger to Joshua's lips, "your name was Joshua, but Evangeline is your new name." "I don't want a new name, I want ME back!" Joshua's temper raising as she thrust Violette's finger away from herself. Violette leaned closer, kissed Joshua, and embraced her. Joshua tried to pull away, but her strength was not of its former caliber.
As Joshua struggled, she began to enjoy it. Her mind was clouded with pleasure, as Joshua began to kiss back. Violette pulled away after a bit and placed a necklace around Joshua's neck, and over her forehead, and said softly, "See, not all is lost Evangeline." Evangeline slowly opened her eyes, and walked closer to Violette,
"Definitely not," she said with pleasure still clouding her vision." Then Evangeline began to kiss Violette again, but she slowly moved down Violette's neck, and then Evangeline sunk her fangs into Violette's neck. Violette's eyes opened wide with surprise, only to go halfway open with a pleasure full look upon her face. Then Violette sunk her fangs into Evangeline's neck. The night continued on, Violette showing Evangeline how to be a vampire, and more importantly, how to be, and what it feels like, to be a woman.
You guys wanted a long story, well here it is lol. This is the first time I've done a (full length) completely imaginational story. I hope you like it, and I will be adding stories like these to available commissions. Here a link to my commission list (I'm updating it) [link]
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TomBrans1 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015
Despite the unwilling transformation a very lovely and nice story! Hope Violette will show up in my neighbourhood very soon too ..... .
Dartmuth Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, you and me both.
ericheitman Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
cool story
roodaka777 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
what's dont drop the soap mean
Dartmuth Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Idk why you are asking me, but it refers to prison and that if you have to bend down to get the soap, well, just google it...
monstermaster13 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is so dark and powerful, i love it.
Dartmuth Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
monstermaster13 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome.
6pathsofpain Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
um, what exactly happens when a vampire bites another vampire?
Dartmuth Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well, because these vampires are pleasureful to be bitten by, I would assume it would feel pretty awesome. I got inspiration for that last part by Elijah Wood's part in the movie Paris, je t'aime.
Haegun Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015
I think I've seen a clip of the bite scene from that on the web.  She smiled at as Elijah Wood's character turns and does what comes naturally.
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